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I HATE YOU!

Well not any more, but I did hate you becuase you took Mickey Mouse and made me never be able to look at him again. That is until South Park made Mickey redem his self by beating up the Jonas Brothers (ah good old Mickey). This animation brought mickey's rep back up a bit. As for Goofy, I always knew he was addicted to some thing.

Jonnyethco responds:

That South Park episode was awesome. :)

AHH my brain!

Funny as hell, but I wish you had lip sniced unlike how all japanese shows don't. Also this seems to be the plot line for all animes only this is so much funnier. Nice work guys.

Egoraptor responds:

Well, I mean, you just told yourself why we didn't lipsync right there.

good concept

nice plot and angles. Another angle you could have gone with is that the man has a video camara hat or web cam sized camara on his sholder or head. Show the adeance in the beginning where the camara is at then do the rest of the animation from that veiw. and when he is filming him self remove the hat or camara off him.

Now for me to point out things to inprove. Alice, when walking toward the car, should move her legs instead of having an entire figure move closer to the car with no movement. Also when Alice is at the window her face is in full light when no light is shineing at her, only the right side (her left) should have some light from the head lights (did they break I cant remember, if so she should be all shadows and only top of head has little amount of light from moon). Also when the man had his camara facing the forest without him in it, I saw Alice's shoulder appear out of thin air instead of it coming slowly/fastly, also when the man turns the camara things should be a blur for a moment(I think background blured but alice did not, but this is a weaker argument then my others).

With that said I hope you can make the changes, and im not to sure if you can edit the movie and update what we see on newgrounds, if your in a contest, if you can please update soon.

Also great selection of music.

M1K3-B responds:

Very well put. I'll update it and see what I can do. Thanks so much for the review/score.

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