Cantdoright's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Homeless Vagabond]

wow

really hits you there. I found only one flaw and that was when Mr. Poor was looking in the window, he should have faded (how ever you spell it) in ratheir then just pop out of nowhere. Everything else was nice and just needed minor twecking, nothing to big though.

[Calvin and Hobbes]

The box that can do everything

I only had two problems with it. one too short and two hobbes is missing his white belly fur when there in the box.

[.Alice.]

good concept

nice plot and angles. Another angle you could have gone with is that the man has a video camara hat or web cam sized camara on his sholder or head. Show the adeance in the beginning where the camara is at then do the rest of the animation from that veiw. and when he is filming him self remove the hat or camara off him.

Now for me to point out things to inprove. Alice, when walking toward the car, should move her legs instead of having an entire figure move closer to the car with no movement. Also when Alice is at the window her face is in full light when no light is shineing at her, only the right side (her left) should have some light from the head lights (did they break I cant remember, if so she should be all shadows and only top of head has little amount of light from moon). Also when the man had his camara facing the forest without him in it, I saw Alice's shoulder appear out of thin air instead of it coming slowly/fastly, also when the man turns the camara things should be a blur for a moment(I think background blured but alice did not, but this is a weaker argument then my others).

With that said I hope you can make the changes, and im not to sure if you can edit the movie and update what we see on newgrounds, if your in a contest, if you can please update soon.

Also great selection of music.

M1K3-B responds:

Very well put. I'll update it and see what I can do. Thanks so much for the review/score.

[The Sun Portal]

good ideas

great story but with some spit and polish it could be 10 times better.

[Insane Mania]

very nice

I found that you could have made seeing the white guy by just giving him a black outline insted of a black box.

[Phoenix Wrong:Objection 3]

secret

is when larry is talking in the corner. If you dont know who larry is too bad.

[1c The Hideous Plot]

Very good

I saw many little flaws like when the villian bends his arm there is a gap of no out line. Voices are good and great story.

[Professor Layton pt. 2]

annoyingly funny

very funny but got annoying at the places poeple before me said.

Also ReignWizard, mother? the girl hinding was...um...(pulls out DS with professor latin)... ah yes her name is Flora.

[FF6 Opera-Pella Fun]

the hate them

wow those guys are so cool they dont even have seatbelts in there car.

[Cutethulhu]

ewww

tea with milk yuck, I hope those girls are from america where our tea is a cup of joe.