Cantdoright's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Everything by Everyone]

nice art

But this is an Illustration, not pixel art. Please try to not make this mistake again, thank you. Now on to the art, it is a very nice piece and reminds me of shadow the hedgehog. Also I like your newgrounds implications. Unfortunatly there are a few mistakes, the lines are a bit wavey and not very precise. Lastly are the breast, they show no form and the shirt does not match the shape. Other then that it is a nice piece of work.

Alanosborn responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism, it helps me get better at doing what I love.

So thanks man,

-Alan

[Corn Camper]

Wow

That is amazing man, love the mood and style of the corn, the exsperetions really pop out. Some truely nice pixel art.

Hellstick responds:

Thanks alot man!
Appriciation appriciated!:D

[My Style of Characters]

nice...

Better then the explosion, but it lacks in mood and subject. Also the arms are slightly uneven and I would recomend eyelids to you. The hair is also too boxed up and his lower lip is missing. Good first and the ear is nice, just keep drawing and you'll become better.

ChandlerThompson responds:

Thanks, I appreciate all the help.

[Explosion Sketch]

I see...

As said before examples of the real thing help alot. Straight lines appear often in your work and gives the feeling that you only use the line tool. I also do not understand the yellow star... is that where the bomb hit? Also the most importent thing that I grade down on is no background, even simple backgrounds will do, but not just black. Backgrounds can make any piece of artwork better. Don't give up and keep drawing.

ChandlerThompson responds:

The yellow star was intended to be where the bomb hit, but the help on the straight lines is appreciated, it makes a lot more sense now. Thanks.